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A utina a he my heart is pounding like a drum. All I can see is the crowd cheering like crocodiles and the guitars playing oh no we are going as fast as a cheetah but we need to go as slow as a turtle. Me and Corbin cant slow it down. I felt that it was just to fast but I had A blast looking at everyone dance and sing. In the middle of it I had butterflies in my tummy and my tummy started to ache. My Mum and Dad have found me lets just try and hide. Before I no it Its all over HE.


By Egg