Riverdale Writing

I remember saying man I dont like school but one year later that all changed cause in class we would play games to fun work and make great friends school was the best every day I wanted to go early so I would pack my bag and go. Ill will always remember all the great Times we had at Riverdale also jobs like Road patrol Hall seating also special trips like Camp Electives and Loads more I would like to thank all the teachers Mr mcallum Mrs peck Karina karran TC and all my friends bye

Writing

Planning- Te puawai-dancing-singing-slow down-fast-guitars-music-the crowd

A utina a he my heart is pounding like a drum. All I can see is the crowd cheering like crocodiles and the guitars playing oh no we are going as fast as a cheetah but we need to go as slow as a turtle. Me and Corbin cant slow it down. I felt that it was just to fast but I had A blast looking at everyone dance and sing. In the middle of it I had butterflies in my tummy and my tummy started to ache. My Mum and Dad have found me lets just try and hide. Before I no it Its all over HE.


By Egg

The Bullie and Nerds

Characters
Larry-(nerd)
Rudolph-(nerd)
Bucky-(nerd)
Sparrow-(bully)

Mr M- (Teacher)
(scene)- School

Larry- Come on guys its our first day at school

Bucky and Rudolph - Cool

Larry- Lets go to our new class
(riiiiinnnnng)

Bucky- Quick there goes the bell

Larry- lets get into class

Rudolph- whoa lets do some maths

Larry and Bucky- Yeah
(riinng)

Rudolph- There goes the bell for playtime

Bucky- Do you now 3+5

Larry- yeah the answers 8 I'm good at maths now

Rudolph- I need to go toilet cause I'm busting

Bucky- Alright you go toilet and we'll stay here

Sparrow- 1$ Nerd everybody pays the price to go toilet

Rudolph- what But I really need to go toilet

Sparrow- I said 1$ NERD if you don't give me 1$ no toilet for you

Rudolph- I don't like you cause your really mean

Sparrow- what everybody likes me and you don't

Rudolph-aaaahhhhh I'm out of here because your a bullie and your mean

Sparrow- Hey I'm not finished with you ugly NERD come back here

Bucky and Larry- Man schools cool I never thought It would be this cool

Rudolph -Its not that cool there's a bullie called sparrow and hes trying to beat me up

Bucky,Rudolph and Larry- AAAAAARRRRGGGGGHHHHH

Sparrow- come back you NERDS I'm not finished with you

Larry- ahh hes got me

Sparrow- give me your lunch money

Larry- man guys hes a bullie

Bucky- we will tell the teacher

Mr M - Sparrow your in detention

Larry - yes

Bucky- now we dont have to worry about him ever again

My sock puppet

My puppet is a little geek and his name is Larry. Who is always teased at school by a kid called sparrow. they used to be best friends but now there worst enemies and they always have fights and Larry never ever wins. he eats rocks and stones to survive.He is always happy except when he fights sparrow. Larry has a best friend called Bucky and Larry lives in a house by River dale school. he goes to River dale to learn. He has a geek bed he is big fat and chubby. his fav food is a scorpion and he loves the colour blue. he feels crippled and crunchy and rough

My Alien

11/6/10WALT describe....... With VOICE
My Alien is about 10 meters tall it bounces like a bouncy ball. It has dark green skin and it dribbles out blood it has one spear in its blue sparkling eyes and when its angry it turns into a cannon ball and bowls everybody over it has a rainbow waste band around his waste. and it has serious gas problems it has red balls in its skin that pops every 30 seconds he is blind and he never dies so If he walks he walks on the road and gets by a car he does not die it is as big as a hippopotamus. It eats flowers to survive and it looks like the ugliest thing in the world when he wakes up and he has no friends so when everybody walks past the say whats that ugly thing so that's what my monster looks like. my monsters name is shorty

AUTUMN

As I walk through the Forest I see all the leaves falling from the trees I say Is it Autumn already the leaves are as brown as the mud!!!!!. I stumble towards the leaves as I can feel them tickling my toes they feel crispy and crunchy and they break easily. They smell like rotten eggs they are red, brown, yellow and green they are as bumpy as a hump on a camels back.

MY CROSS COUNTRY RUN TODAY

WALT describe with voice

Come on Con we are coming round to our first lap alright then as we are running to put the bean in I hear MOVE IT THAT'S PATHETIC BOYS I want both of you up at the front. we run as fast as a cheetah up to the front but we start to slow down it's so painful It feels like your been for a 15 K run an then straight after that you have to do a sprint race against the fastest kid in skool and you just win so thats what the cross country run felt like PAINFUL