Sunday, May 2, 2010

FISHING

sea monsters, boats, made up names,, snapper, great white shark, dolphin,
underwater explosion, red life jackets

HELLO my name is Hiwi and one day I was out fishing with my mates. I had three mates one was called Caleb, Mike and Kale. Mike had caught a fish and it was a big one so he asked us for help we all pulled and we had finally pulled it in and it was a.......... GREAT WHITE SHARK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!It's tummy was as white as the clouds and its teeth were chewing the boat like it was our own motor snapping our boat in half we all jumped out
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh we screamed. 'here comes a dolphin' it chases the shark away and pops his head out of the water and says bye little BOBO. want to play a game says HIWI alright then but first just let me get something as Caleb goes over to get something he hears a SPLASH!!!!!
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH a sea monster. Hey come back I just want to make friends cause lonely we are sorry that we ran away we'll be your friends really yes thank you. we were just about to play a game would you like to play yes please what game are we playing last card cool I'm the best a that game we'll see about that. While they were playing last card mike said last card and Larry the sea monster said know your have 2 cards left your just hiding one be Quiet YELLS Mike but that's cheating who cares I'm not your friends anymore we'll go away then. A day later the sea monster and his family come back and they fought his X friends but it wasn't enough Hiwi and mike were left standing and they got taken back to shore on a boat and they went to get McDonald THE END

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