Riverdale Writing

I remember saying man I dont like school but one year later that all changed cause in class we would play games to fun work and make great friends school was the best every day I wanted to go early so I would pack my bag and go. Ill will always remember all the great Times we had at Riverdale also jobs like Road patrol Hall seating also special trips like Camp Electives and Loads more I would like to thank all the teachers Mr mcallum Mrs peck Karina karran TC and all my friends bye

Writing

Planning- Te puawai-dancing-singing-slow down-fast-guitars-music-the crowd

A utina a he my heart is pounding like a drum. All I can see is the crowd cheering like crocodiles and the guitars playing oh no we are going as fast as a cheetah but we need to go as slow as a turtle. Me and Corbin cant slow it down. I felt that it was just to fast but I had A blast looking at everyone dance and sing. In the middle of it I had butterflies in my tummy and my tummy started to ache. My Mum and Dad have found me lets just try and hide. Before I no it Its all over HE.


By Egg

The Bullie and Nerds

Characters
Larry-(nerd)
Rudolph-(nerd)
Bucky-(nerd)
Sparrow-(bully)

Mr M- (Teacher)
(scene)- School

Larry- Come on guys its our first day at school

Bucky and Rudolph - Cool

Larry- Lets go to our new class
(riiiiinnnnng)

Bucky- Quick there goes the bell

Larry- lets get into class

Rudolph- whoa lets do some maths

Larry and Bucky- Yeah
(riinng)

Rudolph- There goes the bell for playtime

Bucky- Do you now 3+5

Larry- yeah the answers 8 I'm good at maths now

Rudolph- I need to go toilet cause I'm busting

Bucky- Alright you go toilet and we'll stay here

Sparrow- 1$ Nerd everybody pays the price to go toilet

Rudolph- what But I really need to go toilet

Sparrow- I said 1$ NERD if you don't give me 1$ no toilet for you

Rudolph- I don't like you cause your really mean

Sparrow- what everybody likes me and you don't

Rudolph-aaaahhhhh I'm out of here because your a bullie and your mean

Sparrow- Hey I'm not finished with you ugly NERD come back here

Bucky and Larry- Man schools cool I never thought It would be this cool

Rudolph -Its not that cool there's a bullie called sparrow and hes trying to beat me up

Bucky,Rudolph and Larry- AAAAAARRRRGGGGGHHHHH

Sparrow- come back you NERDS I'm not finished with you

Larry- ahh hes got me

Sparrow- give me your lunch money

Larry- man guys hes a bullie

Bucky- we will tell the teacher

Mr M - Sparrow your in detention

Larry - yes

Bucky- now we dont have to worry about him ever again

My sock puppet

My puppet is a little geek and his name is Larry. Who is always teased at school by a kid called sparrow. they used to be best friends but now there worst enemies and they always have fights and Larry never ever wins. he eats rocks and stones to survive.He is always happy except when he fights sparrow. Larry has a best friend called Bucky and Larry lives in a house by River dale school. he goes to River dale to learn. He has a geek bed he is big fat and chubby. his fav food is a scorpion and he loves the colour blue. he feels crippled and crunchy and rough

My Alien

11/6/10WALT describe....... With VOICE
My Alien is about 10 meters tall it bounces like a bouncy ball. It has dark green skin and it dribbles out blood it has one spear in its blue sparkling eyes and when its angry it turns into a cannon ball and bowls everybody over it has a rainbow waste band around his waste. and it has serious gas problems it has red balls in its skin that pops every 30 seconds he is blind and he never dies so If he walks he walks on the road and gets by a car he does not die it is as big as a hippopotamus. It eats flowers to survive and it looks like the ugliest thing in the world when he wakes up and he has no friends so when everybody walks past the say whats that ugly thing so that's what my monster looks like. my monsters name is shorty

AUTUMN

As I walk through the Forest I see all the leaves falling from the trees I say Is it Autumn already the leaves are as brown as the mud!!!!!. I stumble towards the leaves as I can feel them tickling my toes they feel crispy and crunchy and they break easily. They smell like rotten eggs they are red, brown, yellow and green they are as bumpy as a hump on a camels back.

MY CROSS COUNTRY RUN TODAY

WALT describe with voice

Come on Con we are coming round to our first lap alright then as we are running to put the bean in I hear MOVE IT THAT'S PATHETIC BOYS I want both of you up at the front. we run as fast as a cheetah up to the front but we start to slow down it's so painful It feels like your been for a 15 K run an then straight after that you have to do a sprint race against the fastest kid in skool and you just win so thats what the cross country run felt like PAINFUL

MRS WALKER

WALT Describe with voice
Mrs Walker jumps around on the stage like a bazaar, blue, bouncy, ball,. She works so hard in jump jam that she sweats like a ice cream melting on a hot summer day and her voice is so loud she could call to all the animals in the world and they would come to her. she is so fast. If the mouse was 5 meters away from her she could catch it with her hands in 5 seconds flat so that is what Mrs Walker is like. BY CAELUM

what they are going to win

strawberry smoothie

boysenberry smoothie

banana smoothie

blueberry smoothie

raspberry smoothie

grape smoothie

FISHING

sea monsters, boats, made up names,, snapper, great white shark, dolphin,
underwater explosion, red life jackets

HELLO my name is Hiwi and one day I was out fishing with my mates. I had three mates one was called Caleb, Mike and Kale. Mike had caught a fish and it was a big one so he asked us for help we all pulled and we had finally pulled it in and it was a.......... GREAT WHITE SHARK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!It's tummy was as white as the clouds and its teeth were chewing the boat like it was our own motor snapping our boat in half we all jumped out
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh we screamed. 'here comes a dolphin' it chases the shark away and pops his head out of the water and says bye little BOBO. want to play a game says HIWI alright then but first just let me get something as Caleb goes over to get something he hears a SPLASH!!!!!
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH a sea monster. Hey come back I just want to make friends cause lonely we are sorry that we ran away we'll be your friends really yes thank you. we were just about to play a game would you like to play yes please what game are we playing last card cool I'm the best a that game we'll see about that. While they were playing last card mike said last card and Larry the sea monster said know your have 2 cards left your just hiding one be Quiet YELLS Mike but that's cheating who cares I'm not your friends anymore we'll go away then. A day later the sea monster and his family come back and they fought his X friends but it wasn't enough Hiwi and mike were left standing and they got taken back to shore on a boat and they went to get McDonald THE END